great opening lines:between, georgia by joshilyn jackson

January 11, 2007 at 9:15 pm | In Great Opening Lines, Fiction--General, Books |

The war began thirty years, nine months, and seven days ago, when I was deaf and blind, floating silent and serene inside Hazel Crabtree.  I was secreted in Hazel’s womb, which was cloaked in her pale and freckled skin, which was in turn hidden by the baggy sweatsuits she adopted so she would look fat instead of pregnant.  Which was ridiculous, because who ever heard of a fat Crabtree?  They were all tall and weedy, slouching around like wilting stems, red hair blooming out the top.

Hazel Crabtree was fifteen years old, and no one thought twice about her expanding waistline as she crept around the edges of rooms, watching her mother ignore her and ignoring me in turn as I kicked at her and spun and grew myself some lungs.

I never heard Hazel’s side of the story.   ….

from Between, Georgia by Joshilyn Jackson

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